Oh, that's okay. I would lie if I told you I wasn't disappointed, but I really hadn't expected more.
I also agreed with the critiques, which is why I overworked it. Just posted the two for comparison...

If I understood it right, there'll be a come back challenge. Maybe I'll try again, we'll see if I'll find the time then.

I'm happy that I voted for yours!

Thank you so much for your words, it really helps that you and satin_red_doll didn't think mine was one of the worst!!! Thanks for telling me again!